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Post by adamrocks on Aug 7, 2016 18:43:17 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 18:55:17 GMT -5
Having a devil of a time trying to edit. .. I wore the pain on my face Hoping some day it would fade Know how to wash it away How you do it? I wear the smile you gave me Won't take it off if you paid me I wouldn't say that you saved me But the truth is Right when we met You made me forget That my heart was ever broke broken Looking at me You wouldn't believe that my heart was ever broken I don't think I agree with all your edits. I definitely here a "you" before the 3rd line in your post and I don't hear "How", but I'm not sure what I hear. And there is definitely a "that" in "I wear the smile that you gave me". LindaG23 suggested "the night" instead of "right". That makes more sense. Bro Broken is split in two yes. I did correct Hopend into Hoping. Maybe some-one else can listen in too? Listen to that section here and see what you think. www.amazon.com/Broken-Tritonal-Jenaux-feat-Lambert/dp/B01JP7CMC2
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Post by evergreen on Aug 7, 2016 19:17:40 GMT -5
See my lyrics write up above. I don't think he sings "if he loves me", but still it's about loving someone. Your lyrics for that line sound right. Ah, well. It would have been nice! This song is definitely a grower (for me). I'm liking it more and more. The melody reminds me of another song, but I've been out of the loop and haven't been listening to much radio lately, so I can't put my finger on the tune. I hope "Broken" gets a fairer shake and more support than "Welcome to the Show" and "Can't Go Home," both of which I thought were great and had so much potential. The melody for a couple of the lines remind me of part of a song that Adam sang when he was in Wicked. I can't remember the song, but someone here does, I'm sure...
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Post by 3ku1 on Aug 7, 2016 19:31:45 GMT -5
From what I have heard I don't think WTTS was ever planned for a radio release, They were just building streams. And got a ton of revenue from the NHL using it. And CGH was not Adams song. And Aoki does not tradationally release songs to Mainstream Radio, does Dance Radio. I am not sure if Broken is even going to be sent to radio, who knows,
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Post by nonotme on Aug 7, 2016 19:35:25 GMT -5
Your lyrics for that line sound right. Ah, well. It would have been nice! This song is definitely a grower (for me). I'm liking it more and more. The melody reminds me of another song, but I've been out of the loop and haven't been listening to much radio lately, so I can't put my finger on the tune. I hope "Broken" gets a fairer shake and more support than "Welcome to the Show" and "Can't Go Home," both of which I thought were great and had so much potential. The melody for a couple of the lines remind me of part of a song that Adam sang when he was in Wicked. I can't remember the song, but someone here does, I'm sure... Dancing Through Life - Also, check out his dance moves in that number - spin, twirl - not unlike some moves he did during the Original High tour. peace&love
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Post by enchanted on Aug 7, 2016 20:10:00 GMT -5
So far a very quiet Sunday, I think Adam needs a little outing or something!
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 20:17:23 GMT -5
I see Patti found the credits for Broken
Chad Cisneros and David Reed are Tritonal Eugene Veltman is Jenaux
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 20:28:40 GMT -5
I see Patti found the credits for Broken Chad Cisneros and David Reed are Tritonal
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 20:31:33 GMT -5
I see Patti found the credits for Broken Chad Cisneros and David Reed are Tritonal I saw ya down below
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Post by Deleted on Aug 7, 2016 20:45:14 GMT -5
:D Off topic but funny Guy Sebastian is on SnapChat now hiking Runyon. Huffing and Puffing like crazy. :D
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